titanland

Deep in the bosom of the night he trudged on

accompanied only by the sound of

staccato static weeping in his ears.

Long ago his helmet light went out-

plunging him into bewildering darkness

he was tempted to contact the outside world

to seek out what options he had to survive,

if only the radio had not died too.

Still he could not comprehend the series of

events that culminated in this total isolation;

what alien malice worked against him and his mission?

Soon, lost in his thoughts, he stumbled upon the

discovery that would reveal all the answers…

ahead of him stood a denizen of this lonesome

worldlet—it’s body glowing in orange phosphorescence,

it’s teeth a white ivory gleam-

he stood there realizing the formalities of

First Contact would not apply.

13 responses to “Titan”

  1. Faust Avatar
    Faust

    Really nice work man

  2. dliw canis Avatar
    dliw canis

    Reblogged this on dliwcanis.

  3. darknesslites Avatar
    darknesslites

    Nice, rather more of a short story intro feel to it than a poem will there be more?

  4. awax1217 Avatar
    awax1217

    It is interesting that we feel aliens would eat us, or parts of us, or imbibe our blood. Even absorbing us sounds implausible. In fact they might fear us with the same concepts.

    1. christopherbollinger Avatar
      christopherbollinger

      I agree. The incompatibility of two divergently evolved beings would exclude the eater from being able to ingest the eatee biochemically. It does not of course preclude the alien to follow whatever instinct for survival it may have…including the unfortunate severe indigestion caused by earthmen.

    2. Raj Avatar
      Raj

      That’s a real possibility. Even they would be backward in various factors. To be this or to be that!

    3. xmiadeclar Avatar
      xmiadeclar

      mentre leggevo …pensavo la stessa cosa !

  5. worldzeyes Avatar
    worldzeyes

    Reblogged this on World'z EyEs and commented:
    Great Blog!

  6. Mayflower Beacon School Complex Avatar
    Mayflower Beacon School Complex
  7. ashokbhatia Avatar
    ashokbhatia

    A fresh perspective!

  8. r1chardfreeland Avatar
    r1chardfreeland

    It is also interesting that we feel we would recognize being in the presence of an alien, without using instruments and abstract reason; who’s to say we could comprehend, at least initially, something utterly “alien?”

  9. moodsnmoments Avatar
    moodsnmoments

    what one’s mind can see and hear in unfathomable. well put thoughts, a different interesting piece. Thanks and congrats

  10. daropale67 Avatar
    daropale67

    Reblogged this on infoafrique.

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