Titan

titanland

Deep in the bosom of the night he trudged on

accompanied only by the sound of

staccato static weeping in his ears.

Long ago his helmet light went out-

plunging him into bewildering darkness

he was tempted to contact the outside world

to seek out what options he had to survive,

if only the radio had not died too.

Still he could not comprehend the series of

events that culminated in this total isolation;

what alien malice worked against him and his mission?

Soon, lost in his thoughts, he stumbled upon the

discovery that would reveal all the answers…

ahead of him stood a denizen of this lonesome

worldlet—it’s body glowing in orange phosphorescence,

it’s teeth a white ivory gleam-

he stood there realizing the formalities of

First Contact would not apply.

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13 Comments Add yours

  1. Faust says:

    Really nice work man

  2. dliw canis says:

    Reblogged this on dliwcanis.

  3. darknesslites says:

    Nice, rather more of a short story intro feel to it than a poem will there be more?

  4. awax1217 says:

    It is interesting that we feel aliens would eat us, or parts of us, or imbibe our blood. Even absorbing us sounds implausible. In fact they might fear us with the same concepts.

    1. I agree. The incompatibility of two divergently evolved beings would exclude the eater from being able to ingest the eatee biochemically. It does not of course preclude the alien to follow whatever instinct for survival it may have…including the unfortunate severe indigestion caused by earthmen.

    2. Raj says:

      That’s a real possibility. Even they would be backward in various factors. To be this or to be that!

    3. xmiadeclar says:

      mentre leggevo …pensavo la stessa cosa !

  5. worldzeyes says:

    Reblogged this on World'z EyEs and commented:
    Great Blog!

  6. ashokbhatia says:

    A fresh perspective!

  7. r1chardfreeland says:

    It is also interesting that we feel we would recognize being in the presence of an alien, without using instruments and abstract reason; who’s to say we could comprehend, at least initially, something utterly “alien?”

  8. what one’s mind can see and hear in unfathomable. well put thoughts, a different interesting piece. Thanks and congrats

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